‘Very beautiful, Minal’
‘Very lovely, Kunal’;
Are some comments,
on Poems written
by Minal and Kunal.

I brood very hard:
Are these comments
On the poems
By Minal and Kunal?
For Minal and Kunal?

I brood very hard:
Are these comments,
Comments at all?
If for poems,
Superficial;
If for writers,
Can be real.

I brood very hard
Where comments
For poems are?